Great game!
I love the concept, the art and the story, good job! I'm not too in love with the controls though; I was dying more through lack of control than through actual error imo. ultimatum479 mentioned gamepads, and I think one of those it would be a lot of fun, but on a keyboard I find myself sliding into pits and not jumping when I want too often. Not sure what could be done about it, me not having a decent keyboard isn't your fault! :D It's a shame 'cos the game looks awesome, but I've just fallen down too many damn holes already. Great game though. :D